Tuesday, November 21, 2006

Rhythmic Love

Etch my sketch
and make me whole.
Sing love songs to me
that lifts the feet of my
soul.
Bend my heart
until it makes heart shapes.
Can your eyes be the
windows,
to where mine can escape?
I
Love
You.
Barry forever in my
woman's virtue.
Become the apple in my Eve.
Weave into me
and make mahogany dipped love.
Rub additional passion against my lips,
We skip heartbeats....
making poetry music.
I
Need
You.
It's always been you to satisfy my today's tomorrows.
Borrow my hands for folding fingers in yours.
From your chore,
restore broken female.
Male control...
know your roll as my future.
And then start from the beginning.


ebstewart,2006
sweated techniques publishing
all rights reserved

7 comments:

joey said...

"Bend my heart
until it makes heart shapes.
Can your eyes be the
windows,
to where mine can escape?"

yes ma'am, yes ma'am

Anonymous said...

Nice, the lyrics are hot!

Shelle said...

yes yes yes...do they know the passion of 'i need you'...??
beautiful ma

CousinSarah said...

Im with Joey on this one..that line is tight...

Nice to see your softer side more and more...:P

Anonymous said...

So many cool lines!

"Weave into me
and make mahogany dipped love."

Is my favorite, but only if you hold a gun to my head and make me pick just one. Oh darn, can I pick another one?

"Can your eyes be the windows,
to where mine can escape?"

This is my kind of stuff. I love it.

Angel said...

"Etch my sketch
and make me whole..."

"Weave into me
and make mahogany dipped love..."

"...know your roll as my future.
And then start from the beginning..."


mmmm hmmmm...as the love continues to grow, so do your ways of so accurately describing it! beautiful ma'am.

Ebony Stewart said...

JoJo- Word.

Lyrically speaking- Never had a post from you before, so thank you for your comment. Hope to get more post from you.

Shelle- I don't think they know though (smile.

S- Softer sides are hard...its a learning experience.

Xavier- Lol. Thank you for your picks of favorites.

Ang- Thank you. And it's hard to describe something so vivid with words-sometimes(if that makes sense).